Your audience demands more
I enjoyed the movie..the concept of ice cream can make us smile, but the moment its gone, we're back to being sad, even if someone somewhere else is happy for the very same reason you're sad. That happens a lot in life..But yeah, if you made it longer I'd watch it "fa sheezy"!
Also, I don't know what it was about the movie quality, but it seemed to not play smoothly and clearly..the sound was fine, just the picture seemed somewhat distorted at times..maybe you meant to do that and my untrained eye didn't know what to make of it :>